Contoh Balasan Task 3 The Analyses Of The Text Structures From The Three News Reports M4 La1
Text Structures of News Report 1: Aussie Man Dies While Surfing in Lombok | ||
Parts of News | Functions of the Parts | |
I. | Headline | Summarizing the event in a telegraphic text |
Aussie man dies while surfing in Lombok | 1) The casualty - Aussie man 2) The unfortunate event - dies 3) The time and location (an activity) - while surfing in Lombok | |
II. | Newsworthy Event (The first paragraph) | Summarizing the event: Restating the headline in a normal sentence or sentences, with more information added to the facts stated in the headline |
mataram: An Australian tourist named Andrew Richard Wiseman has died after dr0wning while surfing at Tanjung Aan Beach in Lombok, West Nusa Tenggara. | 1) Restating the casualty with further details - An Australian tourist named Andrew Richard Wiseman, ... 2) Restating the death - ... has died ... 3) Adding the reason of the event - ... after dr0wning... 4) Restating the time (in an activity he was doing) - while surfing ... 5) Adding the specified details to the location - ... at Tanjung Aan Beach in Lombok, West Nusa Tenggara 6) Starting with the name of the location of coverage: - mataram: ... | |
III. | Events in Details (The following paragraph) | Elaborating the Newsworthy Event providing more details about the facts stated in the Newsworthy Event |
Based on reports received by police, the 52-year-old man went surfing alone around 11 a.m. on Sunday, Central Park police Chief Adj. Sr. Comr. Kholilur Rochman said. Andrew was found dead at around 1 p.m. | Elaborating the incident 1) the source person - Based on reports received by police, ... - Central Park police Chief Adj. Sr. Comr. Kholilur Rochman said. 2) the casualty’s age - ... the 52-year-old man ... 3) the reason of the accident - ... went surfing alone around 11 a.m. on Sunday, ... 4) the death - Andrew was found dead at around 1 p.m. | |
During his time in Lombok, Wiseman was living in a homestay in Kuta village, Pujut district, in Central Lombok. | Elaborating the casualty 5) his accommodation in Lombok. - ... was living in a homestay in Kuta village, Pujut district, in Central Lombok. | |
The police questioned two other foreign tourists, Eva, from Germany and John Robert Haton, from Australia, who had seen the incident firsthand. “They were the ones who saw the victim dr0wn. Based on their information, the victim dr0wned directly below his surfboard,” Kholilur said on Monday. | Elaborating the accident 6) the firsthand witnesses. - The police questioned two other foreign tourists, Eva, from Germany and John Robert Haton, from Australia, .... - ... They were the ones who saw the victim dr0wn. Based on their information ... 7) the accident - ... the victim dr0wned directly below his surfboard ... 8) the source of information - ... Kholilur said on Monday | |
The two tourists, as well as local residents, immediately brought Wiseman back to shore using a boat. Wiseman was given emergency first aid for 25 minutes, but he could not be resuscitated, Kholilur said. | Elaborating the incident: 9) the attempt to save the casualty’s life. - The two tourists, as well as local residents, immediately brought Wiseman back to shore using a boat. - ... was given emergency first aid for 25 minutes, but he could not be resuscitated ... 10) the source of information ... Kholilur said ... | |
Personnel from the Kuta Police came to the location after receiving reports and brought Wiseman’s body to the local health clinic. The victim’s brother, Steven Wiseman, took the body and refused an autopsy. | Adding information related to the death 11) the authority’s responsibility - Personnel from the Kuta Police came to the location after receiving reports and brought Wiseman’s body to the local health clinic. 12) the family’s responsibility - The victim’s brother, Steven Wiseman, took the body and refused an autopsy. | |
IV. | News Agent’s Initials | Closing the news with the news agent’s initials the owner of the copy right of the news report — JP |
TEXT STRUCTURES OF NEWS REPORT 2: FIRE ERUPTS AT ILLEGAL OIL WELL IN INDONESIA | ||
PART OF NEWS | FUNCTIONS OF PARTS | |
I | Headline | Summarizing the event in a telegraphic text |
Fire erupts at illegal oil well in Indonesia | 1) The unfortunate event - Fire 2) The location (an activity) - At illegal oil well, Indonesia | |
II | Newsworthy Event (The first paragraph) | Summarizing the event: Restating the headline in a normal sentence or sentences, with more information added to the facts stated in the headline |
Jakarta: A fire erupted at an illegal oil well site in Indonesia's northernmost province on Wednesday, killing at least 18 people and injuring about 40 others, some of whom were badly burnt, authorities said. | 1) restating unfortunate event followed by casualty - … killing at least 18 people and injuring about 40 others, some of whom were badly burnt… 2) restating the time - …on Wednesday… 3) Starting with an information from authorities - …some of whom were badly burnt, authorities said. | |
III | Events in Details (The following paragraph) | Elaborating the Newsworthy Event providing more details about the facts stated in the Newsworthy Event |
The fire broke out around 1.30am at a backyard well in a village in Aceh province, on the northern tip of Sumatra Island, according to the National Disaster Management Agency. Authorities were still trying to determine what had caused the fire. Local news reports said it may have started with a spark from a blowtorch or a worker smoking a cigarette. Television news footage and photos showed flames rising at least 10 metres into the air in the farming village of Pasir Putih in East Aceh district, which is about 1600 kilometres north-west of the Indonesian capital, Jakarta. Villagers had gathered at the well shortly after midnight, carrying buckets, jars and barrels, in hopes of collecting crude oil after being told about a massive spill there, according to the disaster agency. "A group of people came to gather up oil and they weren't supposed to be there," the disaster agency said in a statement. At least five homes were gutted by the fire, the agency said. Firefighters and other emergency personnel, along with villagers, were still trying to contain the blaze on Wednesday evening. Indonesia's Ministry of Energy and Mineral Resources and the state-owned oil company Pertamina sent teams to Aceh, which has industrial oil and gas operations, to investigate the incident, said Agung Pribadi, a ministry spokesman. "This is a case of illegal drilling and the ones responsible for it must be dealt with by the law," he said. Agung said the well was being operated by local residents, adding that he was not sure if there were other illegal wells in the area. Lieutenant Colonel Wahyu Kuncoro, chief of the East Aceh district police, told reporters at the scene that firefighters were trying to "break the chain of oxygen" in the well to stop the fire. He confirmed the well operation was illegal, but he said many villagers depended on it for their livelihood. Illegal well operations are common in Indonesian regions where oil is present, including on the islands of Sumatra and Java. In some cases, the wells were abandoned by the Dutch colonial administration that once ruled Indonesia, and are now run by groups of villagers working around the clock. "Oil doesn't come up to the surface easily in these old wells, so they try to pump it up manually, then try to separate the oil by distillation in barrels, and that's where they probably had the fire," said Mangantar Marpaung, former chief of the Indonesian Mining Fire and Rescue Agency. "Then they sell it as kerosene to the local market, or for motorcycles and fishing boats," he said. "Those are their customers. The local governments know, but because they can't provide any other jobs, they look the other way." | Elaborating the incident 1) the beginning of the incident - The fire broke out around 1.30am at a backyard well in a village 2) the cause of the fire - It said it may have started with a spark from a blowtorch or a worker smoking a cigarette. 3) the description of fire - flames rising at least 10 metres into the air in the farming village of Pasir Putih in East Aceh district 4) the effect of the incident - Villagers had gathered at the well shortly after midnight, carrying buckets, jars and barrels, in hopes of collecting crude oil. 5) the loss because of the fire - five homes were gutted by the fire, 6) The response of authorities - Indonesia's Ministry of Energy and Mineral Resources and the state-owned oil company Pertamina sent teams to Aceh, which has industrial oil and gas operations, to investigate the incident 7) the additional information - the well operation was illegal, many villagers depended on it for their livelihood 8) the historical relationship - In some cases, the wells were abandoned by the Dutch colonial administration that once ruled Indonesia, 9) the chronologies of the fire erupted - Oil doesn't come up to the surface easily in these old wells, so they try to pump it up manually, then try to separate the oil by distillation in barrels, and that's where they probably had the fire," 10) the reason why the villagers takes the oil - The local governments know, but because they can't provide any other jobs, they look the other way." | |
IV | News Agent’s Initials | Closing the news with the news agent’s initials 1) the owner of the copy right of the news report — New York Times |
TEXT STRUCTURE OF NEWS REPORT 3: ELEPHANT POACHERS ARRESTED IN MALAYSIA | ||
PARTS OF NEWS | FUCTIONS OF PARTS | |
I | Headline | Summarizing the event in a telegraphic text |
Elephant poachers arrested in Malaysia | 1) The Perpetrators - Elephant poachers 2) The important event - Arrested 3) The country - Malaysia | |
II | Newsworthy Event (The first paragraph) | Summarizing the event: Restating the headline in a normal sentence or sentences, with more information added to the facts stated in the headline |
MALAYSIA: Four heavily armed poachers who targetted wild elephants in Malaysia have been caught, officials said Tuesday, the second such arrest in less than two years. | 1) Restating the subject with further details - Four heavily armed poacher 2) Adding the time of the event reported - Tuesday 3) Starting with the name of the location of coverage: - Malaysia 4) The source of news - Officials | |
III | Events in Details (The following paragraph) | Elaborating the Newsworthy Event providing more details about the facts stated in the Newsworthy Event |
Wildlife officials said the gang caught near the town of Gerik in the nothern Malaysian state of Perak was found with deer antlers and suspected tiger bones. A joint police and wildlife department investigation also led the agents to find an elephant shot dead by the poachers in a nearby forest with its tusks ripped out. “This crew is notorious. They hunt elephants,” wildlife department chief Abdul Kadir Abdul Hashim told AFP. “There are maybe two more [poaching] groups [in the area]. We are working together with the police on this.” A police statement said weapons including rifles and homemade shotguns as well as animal snares were found after they arrested the gang. The elephant’s tusks were not found, with a wildlife official believing that they were already sold. He added that the gang – all locals – were believed to have been operating since 2009, and were also active in the nearby state of Kelantan. The arrests come a year after a seven-man gang was arrested in Kelantan, with explosives, guns and parts of tusks seized.. – AFP | 1) Elaborating the arrest - The evidence goods are deer antlers, tiger bones and an elephant shot dead - weapons including rifles and homemade shotguns 2) The source of news - Wildlife department chief Abdul Kadir Abdul Hashim 3) The additional information of the subject - the gang – all locals –has been operating since 2009 in the nearby state of Kelantan 4) The place - In Kelantan 5) The evidence goods - explosives, guns and parts of tusks | |
IV | News Agent’s Initials | Closing the news with the news agent’s initials 2) the owner of the copy right of the news report —– AFP |
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